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Posted on 29th Jan 2015, 9:01 PM
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Mike Podgor 29th Jan 2015, 9:01 PM edit delete
Mike Podgor
Got some critiques on Reddit, mainly about the art, so I experimented a bit. I tried to keep the line-work more smooth, but as this seems to be primarily a difficulty with the thinner lines which is one of the many reasons I stopped using the smaller lines for the bulk of the artwork. I still tried to smooth things out a bit. Also, it was suggested I get an anatomy book for my anatomy. Since I'm not trying to be ultra-realistic, I'm not going to attempt to become super-detailed but I do freely admit that my skills in drawing people leaves a lot to be desired, so I took an extra step in today's comic that was totally negated by the armor in the first panel. You can see it more on Charleston, though whether he looks any or worse than normal is really up to you to decide. Also, not sure about the close-up in panel three. I'm still working on getting facial proportions formatted more properly.

How am I doing with the art (and writing, though nobody seems to have much of an issue with that)? Please let me know. I'm not going to get better if I don't know what I'm doing wrong. Thank you for reading, though!

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